Monday, October 4, 2010

Playful and Periodic Critique


I really loved the imbalance that my playful composition created, the sense that the boxes could fall over at any minute. I also saw that the composition created line of continuance that followed the boxes around. although I really liked my playful composition, I found that my periodic composition was lacking something, weather that there was too much empty space or still wanting to add another box at the end of the row, I had intended to create tension with the boxes being so close and orderly and having a lot of empty space, but maybe it was too much empty space in the long run.

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